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You the man who gave me life,
yet ruined it so much.
You held me close, then pushed me away,
yet I never felt your touch.

You the man who held me close,
when I was not your own.
You made me see the good in life,
told I would never be alone.

You the man who broke my heart,
the one who look my first love from me.
You made me want, you made me dream,
all the things that you could never be.

You the man who told me to cry,
then pushed my tears away.
I gave you a heart with angel's wings,
but can never trust a word you say.

You the man who hates to fight,
for my battle's are to great.
Yet you would rather fight the world,
and my words of love come far to late.

You the man who left my side,
who never shed a tear.
Now you come back and they smile at you,
but from me your still fear.

You the man who makes me smile,
my friend who brings my heart joy.
Yet you break it like its made of glass,
like I'm simply your little toy.

You the boy who knew me,
when your own blood broke my heart.
I knew you cared, more than you should,
now your question tares me apart.

These are the men who are in my life,
or who I have let go of over time.
They teatch me so much, they break my heart,
but in the end they're alwasy mine.
©2008-2009 ~Isabel-Rose
:iconisabel-rose:

Author's Comments

This poem was inspired by all the men who have meant something to me in my life.

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:iconnavarre61636:
Good job, I think I know who eveyrone is, I just have some trouble placing the brothers.
:iconisabel-rose:
In what?

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~Isabel Black~
:iconnavarre61636:
"The men in my life"
Doesn't it tell you what the comments are for?
:iconisabel-rose:
Oh yeah. I don't exactly remember who they are, let me look and I'll send you the order. What do you think it is?

--
~Isabel Black~
:iconnavarre61636:
the first one's your dad.

the second: your mom's bf

the third's doug

chris is fourth

london's #5

derek

and I think this one's dillon, but I'm not sure

and #8 is John
:iconisabel-rose:
Idk if you were really that right.

My Dad

Tony

Doug

London

Ryan

Derek

Chris

John

--
~Isabel Black~
:iconisabel-rose:
lol, your a dork. I have new poem, but the'yre kind depressing so I might not put them up here.

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~Isabel Black~

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